So true your words. If people only knew the sadness that hides behind our smiles or the bumpy roads we have traveled to make us the person we are today.

If you only knew,
What my life was like-
Take a view,
You'll turn out the light.
^^^
I love this stanza and it is so very true.
And the imagery this stanza created is excellent.

I really enjoyed this poem, it touched me deeply.

Well done
Luanne

I liked the rhyme, good flow!

This poem was deep but cant help but wonder did it really happen

Excellent poem i must say! loved the emotion and just everything about it. way to go. 5/5