Very strong poem, however you might want to make it stronger and go through and do a bit of punctuation etc.
But, I feel it is very strong with lots of emotion.
Remeber, you don't have to go it alone.

I love this poem, i feel the emotion and passion gone into it. You wrote it woth heartache and tears rolling down your face. I cann see how you are confused with him leaving you and how you wish it could be the same as before... Keep it up