Wow very good alot of emotion to this pice i loved it

A very great poem, I love the title "Hell on earth' but i can assure you that that the paradise may also be on earth.
keep on writing.

Excellent! That show AWSOME Imagination and creativity! ;)

This one was good. The flow was good, the rhymes were kind of off. A little forced maybe. But the emotion was good. Not excellent. The whole idea of the poem was pretty unique. Good job.

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