You are my future and my past.
The sun, moon and stars

^^^I love these lines...they are so soft and romantic:)
You made a beautiful love poem!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

We are so far apart,
yet we are so close

That's so sweet!

I felt the flow was a little bit off and could of been better. The structre was good. But I must say when I read a love poem I don't always like to read, "Baby" it just doesn't set the mood.

So here is your poem revised by myself, I feel if you word it this way the flow of the poem is much better and smoother.

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I sit here pondering
Of only you.
With happy thoughts,
Of how you love me so.

We are so far apart,
yet we are so close.
I cant wait till the day
I'm in your arms.

I love you sweetheart,
What else can I say?
You stole my heart,
Along time ago.

We can pass with love,
Through the distance.
Because our love is stronger,
Than anything that I know.

You're my future and past.
The sun, moon and stars.
You are my angel, my one true love
Forever and always.

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Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe