Comments : Everything just fell down with a crash....

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow very touching yet sad poem. i love your style of writing!!! your words are like daggers which stab the reader and pull us into your pain.

    this poem brought back many sad and painful memories of my ex. a truly excellent job, you have an amazing talent and a stunning style of writing!!!! keep up the great work and i will keep reading. another 5/5