Hi.. I guess what u feel in this poem is love, isn't it? I like it 5/5

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!

Good good!

Very emotional... good write... but need some revise as well.

Slang is annoying, but over all the poem is an awsome read. a 5/5 indeed in my book.
PoetryKnight

Very nice work hun. I loved it. Keep it up, Shanik