Comments : Time is Ticking

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    I like it, but a couple of things.

    The clock is ticking
    time is running out,
    ^ I love this line ! !

    Where are we going now?
    Life is like waiting( ) room
    ^ I think u meant to put an 'a' there.

    You sit there until your time comes,
    But until then what do we do with our lives until are time comes?
    ^u didn't need to repeat 'until your times comes'

    Do live life to the fullest?
    Or do we wast our life away know our time could come any moment?
    ^ a very common question.

    overall I like it. 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    Cool dude,leaves me wondering=)5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Its a good poem all in all, but i understand about the typos. i agree about the changes from EmoBritBoo. good poem all in all, 4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Niiice!