Meli! i swear to goodness this made me cry. te lo juro que escribiste mis pensamientos. i'm so sorry that you feel this way. if its any comfort, i'll always be hereee. feeling as shitty as you pero estoy aqui. =]

te queiro un monton!!!!!

Aww this poem really saddened me.. it was very deep and touching! =( i love the way it was structured, great use of words & flow was good. this was my fave part:

"I'm trying to push away my fears
I don't want to say my goodbye
But I'm drowning in my tears"

very touching and powerful, 5/5 keep it up.