Please comment I looking for suggestions on how i can improve this poem

Wow, this was intense..! And very amazing.
The words spoke into my past, when I too.. was feeling that way. And it's awesome how similur it was. Because thats the way everyone.. who doesn't know God feels. Wither they care to admit it or not.
Truly amazing write!

5/5!

God Bless!

I think it's amazing as it is :) I love it.

Keep it the way it is.. beacuse its a masterpiece.