You poem is as beautiful as your name.
when love come around sometimes it's hard to be detected. Keep on writing , kel.

Your name means Love or like in french.

Beautifully done. I love the portrayal of that first love. I especially like the metaphors in the second stanza, the whole idea is beautifully insitefull. The flow was perfect as was the ending :) Keep it up

5/5

Aww this is sweet. I like how you described everything. The world don't care bt it doesn't matter as long as you are in each other eyes lol. NIce picture painted in my head. Great job
-vino

Aww... a BEAUTIFUL write!... about love. Touched my heart... I loved reading this!
You've captured the very essence of falling in love...:)

Extremely well done!
Olwin.

P.S .. Keep writing more!
You've a true talent..lol.

Nice attempt to express the feelings of love. It appears from the words that u have gone through the real love.. Very nice

Wow, what a great write