You touched my heart with this write. It does cause much pain to realize that a love, as was said above, is not what it seemed to be.

What a sad and melancholy poem although well written , its always so sad when love comes to an end or the realisation of that end is seen for the first time. This is the most confusing of all of the human emotions. Well done

Grant

Wow.. This one is of ur best masterpieces! I live this poem and i'll add it to my favorite list.. Keep it up 5/5
regards,
Shokry

Good

"I've learn from the start you're going to break my heart, but the feeling that flow through my body for
you makes all words fell on deaf ears
seeing strange things happens before my eyes,"
-i like how you rocoginzed what can happen before you get into a relationship. i know a lot of people who go though girlfriends/boyfriends weekly and they don't understand why thier relationships don't last.

"Now I realized that you weren't all that cute,
You are a real brute dress up in suit
Now it's time for us to take different route
now you break my heart in two, i have nothing to say to you."
-this is the part when you start to realize that maybe you made a mistake, but i like hou you said this after the previous quote^

great poem over all, I love the message, it's not like other love poems...