That reminds me of someone i knew.....its so sad, you can not even discribe the feeling...

best part: "Moments passed before the doctor came,
Calmly calling out her name."

^^good ryhming =]

great write 5/5

~tia

This is so beautiful. It literally gave me chills. I have known many people to have that felling. One being my mom. Amazing poem. Keep up the great work!
~Kayla

Wow, amazing job.love the ryhming in this... 7/5

Wow. i really do love this. deep, powerful, full of raw emotion. perfect. when i read the title i almost expected it to be sad and terrible, but it turned out to be a happy ending and i love it. awesomejob.
--lovedroughtmelody