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  • 11 years ago

    by HvN

    Beuatifully written.... you don't have to go you know that? :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Kimberley

    .... beautiful. in like a sad way if you know what i mean. i really like this one. good, great, fabulous, wonderful, beautiful, extrodanary, deep, moving, inspiring job. *tear*. its so beautiful. im gonna read it again. great job. Keep up the great work. ~KM~

  • 11 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    She looks down at the dark red, flowing from her wrists.
    Finally, she breaths, finally, shes resists.
    She is done with the pain.
    She will finally be done, with only one vein.

    That was a super powerfulll stanza!!! the whole piece was so enticing. It was dark. loved it!!! if i could i'd give u 20/5