Very creative, I like the way each you began each stanza with a negative line, "I have nothing..."and ended the last one with a positive line ," I have all...". Nice use of contrast.

Felton

It's really good. It flows great I really loved it.

What a wonderful write!!
I really liked the way u wrote it and how u expressed ur emotions in a simple way..

"Pleasure leaving only guilt"...I liked that line more than u can ever imagine, becoz it's the nature of the temporary pleasure..Once it's over,the feeling of guilt starts to eat pleasure..

Great write..
Keep it up:)

Very well written. i love that you incorporated such positivity, but also, sadness.
excellent.

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