I have enjoyed this poem!!
you made me smile with this part:
"and yes, i used to be strong
but with her that no longer work" xD
nice work!! ^^

Too many eyes r looking to her
too many guys r dreaming of her
she never pay attention , she never care
and finally she saw in me her best dream

These lines were really charming. I like how uou added the arabic wird 3asal. And the ending with 1000 nights, wrapped up your thoughts with romantic imagery. 5/5