Good poem, and great story. I like the format and the word choice. I might put it under a different category though cause it isn't all that fun and there isn't much humor. Keep up the good work though it is a great poem. 5/5

I ablsolutely loved it.
it was totally true from beggining to end
we always seem to get the bad ones
when all along the rite ones are standing next to the one thats wrong.
i laughed my ass off at the end good wording
keep it up

I like it it realy good 5/5

Heck yeah! i like the flow of this poem alot.. and the message is amazing.. :) 5/5

The flow of this was confusing...the last line was funny though.. lil heavy but that lightened it up

Thanks everyone XD haha i havent been on here in so long so sorry i didnt reply sooner :)