Comments : Shes going to start

  • 12 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Your poem is very sad and full of emotion. I sorry for this sadness..I'm sure that she will find a way out! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Nice one!! i really like this one. you have alot of good poems but this one makes the top 5 by far.
    'by her family, she was hated
    her friends, rated'

    i love that line! keep it up! you rock!! ~KM~

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    O my gosh I loved it!!! It's one of my favs!!!!!! The whole thing was awesome!!! YOu go girl!!!!!!!!! *hugs*

  • 12 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Great rhyme scheme... kinda sad... really sad=/ still very good tho... Nice work! 5/5