"standing in the middle of nowhere
feeling like am at the end
of a road which doesn't even have a beginning"
Your words really have alot of meaning
I love fairytale stories so I enjoyed reading this alot. The fact that you made it so sad and full of emotion was great! The sad ending gives your writing alot of effect.
"on a castle built up so high
high on the top of my feelings
a forbidden fortress"
And these words were really charming. Great Job 5/5

Mav, My dear wonderful friend
such a lovely piece you penned here =]
First let me criticize some small things :

am getting more & more lonely
without her by my side
am just another hollow man with an empty life

If you wanna use abbreviations categorize it in the "slang poems", So just change the "am" to "I'm" and the "&" to "and"

my heart's became lighter than ever
let me correct this. "my heart's becOme"

Soo, other than those, it was touchy =]]
You know how much I admire unrhymed poems for their beauty :)

my heart's became lighter than ever
without her presence, a restless feather
facing the storming weather

Those lines were amazing, I fell in love with them !!
Very well done on this piece, I hope I'll have to see more of yours very soon Insha'aalh =]

Write on
xx

This poem is very beautiful. :) I loved it. 5/5

It is another marvelous piece. I truely loved it.you used your wide imaginary to describe the feelings that are kept inside you.And I can see how much the feelings they are sad,but Insha'allah everything is going to be better soon.

Give you my vote.5\5...

Keep it up