Well if you ever need to talk and vent I am here :)
This was another great piece of work Good work :)

"For me everyone can die"
Into:
"To me, everyone can die"

Well! I liked this one a lot! It was very well written, very few grammar mistakes :) and the emotion was narrow and you could feel it flowing out of the poem. Bravo. Ugh, i can feel like that.. all the time too. It's nice to see someone feels the same once in a while.
Keep writing.
*Chaotic Angel*