I find there are some "jerky" moments to the way this feels, sometimes sublime, other times words that are too time worn (i.e. diamonds, sun imagery) and causes the experiencer to be unable to stay in its flow of mood and content, however, the overall quality of this work is easily beyond a mere rating of "4"! Besides "ratings" are a tricky thing when it comes to "poetry". The creator of this sardonical witty poem has a true knack for making their work more like flesh and blood realism to the extent the receiver feels more like a "friend" listening than a voyuer reader dealing with a piece of dried "ink" on a page.