I'm still a child somehow
somewhere inside lies a child
afraid of the unknown
scared of losing his way into the wild

I loved this stanza, I think it hits home for me xD..we're all are children in the inside, and well, especially men =P haha !!

but for how long can heart fool the mind ?
sooner or later the dig will get there

I love those lines too a lot, especially the first one, amazingly expressed.

I've been on this site for 4 years now and I've never written an about-life piece..I think this is such a good one and I admired the meaningfulness in it.

Well done
Keep 'em comin ;)

OMG.It is the same thing that I feel, I still feel that there is still a part of my childhood is hidden inside me, but people around me still refuse seeing this part in me. It is absloutly an amazing piece,am gonna add it to my favorites.

Well done.5\5...

Nice work