Comments : Forever

  • 15 years ago

    by Skyfire

    I like the imagery where you compare memories to photographs, and photographs to tattoos. Nicely done.

  • 15 years ago

    by samie renae

    I like this a lot i can really relate to it with me and my boyfriend

  • 15 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    This was so moving. my fav stanza:

    I also miss his caring soul
    eating away my sorrow and sadness.
    with me in his loveing arms,
    The memory returns.

    the part about his soul eating away ur sorrow and sadness really touched me. it was so visual within its meaning. nicely done!