Awww. *teardrop* i .... love....it. sorry its hard to write inbetween tears. that was amazing beyond beleif!!! love it, love you! keep up the _________ (place any good adjective here) work!!! ~KM~

Great poem. I enjoyed it. Keep up the great writting!

-xx-

Sounds like meee! awesome poem!

keep it up, i love it. 5/'5

This poem is really easy to relate to .. Considering there's someone like that in everyones school who you always wonder what thier life is like . The flow is off in a few places , and the lines almost rhyme but they don't .. But you get away with it . I'll give you a 5/5

Beautiful yet sad write, it was enjoyable to read and you deserve a 5/5 =]
Excellent job your portrayal of emotion in this poem was amazing

This is nicely riten here. the word are great. the feeling are there. it sounds kinda like me. broken inside and alwayz pretending. i love it and i give u a hands five *hands five* Oops hehe i missed lol.. well please do keep it up! u got talent use it.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy