Hey Shellaine well written girl i know exactly what you're going through and the feelings you're feeling. Believe it or not there is always a brighter future ahead and i wish you well in finding it

Grant

Another great peice!
i love it

"The feelings i felt were so strong
but the flame of our feelings just couldn't go on,
the more i cared,
the more i fell."

i like this so much like im feeling it,,
nice one!

"love caused pain
and now my tears fall like rain.
emotions run
and i can't keep up,
this is just part of being in love."

this too,,
like i love u but this loves hurting me,,

"if you ever decided that you care
then just remember i was once there..."

and this lines saying like you cant let go,,

i love this,,
ill keep reading your poems,,
5/5