"Not anymore, not anymore, I've lost reality's touch
It's them I adore, it's them I adore, I love them so much"
- Out of the entire poem, these have to be my two favorite lines. Mostly because of the repetetion you have placed in both of them. It was unique and worked really well.

You seem as if you're going through a difficult time, but you're doing a good thing by writing to relieve the tension. I commend you on that.

Nicely written. 5/5

Take care,
Stephanie

It seems, that no matter what your going through, you can put it down in words and make it sound like a thoroughly planned piece of work. I'm envious of your talent tripp, and envious that you have realised whats happening with you and are trying to change it.

don't give up, don't give in

love niquee
x♥x