Comments : My lady fair

  • 10 years ago

    by Meme

    OMG!!!!!!
    it is a really amazing poem, I specailly loved this part

    "I'm yours! As much as one man may,
    Without the bonds of slavery wrought,
    Be bound to one in every way,
    I'm yours, my soul your words have bought."

    100/100 :)

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    Oh, I absolutely love this poem. It conveys such a sincere, and giving heart. (: The way in which you placed your words really gave it an old timey romantic feel, and the cadence was practically flawless. I also liked how you started each stanza with an exclamatory statement, placing the emphasis with the most simple, but most important notions of the heart. Overall, this piece really made me smile, it is very sweet and passionate!

    Keep writing down the bones,
    `Nova

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    What a lucky women...to have this kind of devotion from one who can express it so well. Excellent!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    What a tender piece you have penned.

    Sleep well! And praise the coming dawn,
    For though the stress of life may show,
    In innocence, like new born fawn,
    You will be pure as falling snow.

    This stanza is so beautiful. The snow just adds such a perfect touch .

    Then wake! And know that life is pure,
    That not shall hardships on you land,
    For love has found you well and sure,
    If you but reach and take my hand.

    What a beautiful poem of love. I hope your hands come together.
    Excellent job!

    Take care my friend :)
    Love Cindy