Aw that wasn't less than a masterpiece !!
I definitely like each and every line in it..
I guess it was more of a dark piece.
I loved the simplicity of the lines, yet you chose very captivating wordings !

Playing pretend with the indicated signs of hate,
You still can't see how I'm tearing apart my fate

Those lines were AW-SO-ME..
Gosh I truly like this piece from the deep depth of my heart
I'm in love with your poetry, I think I'm addicting it already.

Sea you're amazing..absolutely amazing ^.^
I'm honored to have you in my list.
you're so underestimated =[ .
Write on
xx