I think that a lot of people could relate to this poem. It is sad but true, to many people use others these days. The flow was consistent and the word choice was great. I gave it a 5/5

Its the way your eyes shine
the way you speak kind
its the way you smile
girl you drive me wild
its your cute little nose
the way your hair flows
when you let it go
just wanna let you know
that your like the rose
lit on a sunset coast
and you'll never know
how much i loved you girl
thought we'd never let it go

this is my favorite stanza. Everything about it is perfect.

This is a great write. Very expressive and this type of experience we all or nearly came upon situations like that, keep it up, kel.