AH ! I LOVE IT
the way you ust put everything into SO MUCH PERSPECTIVE!!
oh man .. i cant tell you how much i love this one.

to be honest, i thought that this might be a funny one. but then ii ust read through it..twice.and then once again . not because it was hard to grasp. but because i really liked how you put things in place.
relating the story to your own. Hard , yet brilliantly done.
i liked how the poem expressed itself and a story and so much more.
Great Work
Loved It !

~Wake~