Wow, that was really beautiful
this piece was like full of wise wonderful words.
this was an extreme masterpiece =)
I actually cannot pick out my fave stanza..the entire piece is just so amazing with no single flaw !!

Reach for all you've ever dreamed
Don't settle in the dust
Rise up like the burning sun
Accepting what you must

I have to say this stanza was incredibly written...I loved it.

Draining lies, an empty life
No learning from mistakes
Truth is something beautiful
Even when it aches

This one too, I think is my fave, I loved the ending of the piece, it gives so much hope for me..
I hink this is going on my fave list =]]

Amazing write hun
Rock on xx

Jenn
You have penned a great piece here. So many thoughts went through my mind as I read your words.

Deceit that brings a smile
Truth that draws a tear
Which one brings you comfort friend
What do you wish to hear?

Sometimes the truth can hurt so bad. This really makes you think about things the most.

Candy coated, poison hearts
A painful kiss goodbye
Warmth inside a memory
Cold within the lie

Sometimes goodbye is a hard thing to do. but the lie of the reason would hurt so much more.

Reach for all you've ever dreamed
Don't settle in the dust
Rise up like the burning sun
Accepting what you must

I love the inner strength portrayed in this stanza.

Draining lies, an empty life
No learning from mistakes
Truth is something beautiful
Even when it aches

Love the end.
Great job!
Welcome to RTVW
Cindy