Comments : Brutal beauty

  • 11 years ago

    by Nee

    My wonderful Shixo :)
    I'll say just one thing...Harsh.

    Pain still waves within my neck,
    Waiting for my throats suffocation
    I am near the doors of heaven
    But I got neither mercy nor salvation

    My fave one =]]


  • 11 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Sad yet so touching with strong meanings.
    Yeah i truly like your style, keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Heba

    OMG.What a wonderful poem shaima.I really missed your poems a lot and that one was absloutly fantastic>
    Your dark poems are really sad and frightning too>

    Excellent sis.

  • 11 years ago

    by Candice

    Such strong emotions! I have a thing for dark poetry and this one was a really good read short but powerful verses.
    Very Well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Sounds like hell. Black fire, is the hottest flame there is. and i see hell.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ezra

    Dude you are so good at wrighting! i'm no so good >.>(more like i suke at it but hay)

  • 11 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow I have to say I agree with Nema, I loved those lines the most! Your poem was very Strong..I was happy to see you wrote a new one. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Prasad B

    Nice dark write......