Well i can feel the silent screaming in your head... of just want to burst out of the calm facade. I also like the angry tone which you have set in this poem. There there are some of the mistakes that you need to change like...Ill to I'll and Im to I'm... still The context of this poem is great

Excellent Job
5/5 from me

"The memories bubbling over
The fears begin to rise
I feel as though its all a dream
But I cannot open my eyes

Watch me where I crumble
Watch me where I fall
Watch me as I stumble
Watch me through it all...

Through all of this confusion
Hate and lies
With every insult taken
A part of me dies"

I really like those line, such a blunt example of how we can feel sometime.

This poem is a prime example of awesomeness 5/5

Dean-x