You're right, I do like this one really =]
I loved the type this poem was written with. I find it creative

Stay with me please - don't go,
I need to be broken once more,
Just force my feelings to show,
This is the only way to be sure,

I loved this stanza A LOT, especially the second line, needing to be broken is like....Idk it's just a new expression that I like :)

I refuse to accept - this is a lie,
You're only blinding me from hope,
You'll see the truth when I die,
Just help me tie this rope...

I like this one too, I think this was the perfect ending to the piece, after all this conversation it was clear that a move like this will be done !

The poem was great Sean =] I like it and I loved the sentences between the []

Write on
xx