This poem was pretty good, very hard to follow along.

I feel that the average person is going to be confused by the opening line. I was when I first read it, I had to re-read it. I felt that this poem was very hard to follow along.

The middle it really came together and started to pick up and felt that it was something that I could really look forward to.

the end is something that wasn't special, but didn't lose me either.