Good poem, the use of repetition was really good.

GOOD JOB!
keep writing

Love the format. it has a really nice flow to it with emotional words. 5/5 *tear* shoot. i said i wouldn't cry. ~KM~

Hey thx for the comment on my poems.... and i really like this poem.....sad, but good... 5/5

Wow this is a very powerful poem. Very deep. Very good job!!!

So sad. 5/5, Em

This poem is A-MA-ZA-ZING! =D I loved it 5/5