Awww.... what a useless nurse. good poem, i really liked the repeatition. i know someone who should get fired, stupid nurse. nice poem. good flow and a great meaning. 5/5 ~KM~

I've never been abused so i dont understand how it feels but this poem shows the pain very well. The repitition of today was powerful and i loved the last line

"you could have saved my life
today"

it bought the poem to a nice close and left a very clear message.
Short but sweet

Just one thing wrong thou - i think u misspelt one of your words

"you ignored my cried" should it be cries?

but apart from that a gd poem

Veyr powerful and so true. 5/5, Em