Wow! This is beautifully penned. So sad, and I hope it's not true, but it's definitely something I can relate to. Family abuse and such. Anyway, good word choice, almost deadly. I loved the last 2 lines. Keep it up! 5/5

Gr8 job done... nicely penned .... n hope u r fine ...

Love

That was written very well. The flow was flawless, and the ending was great. One line you have a repeated word though:

"that one one will ever care"

-that no one will ever care?..

Besides that, it was a wonderful peice. Hats off to you, 5/5.

-mandy :)

OMG, so very sad. Teachers don't really do nothing, I've noticed that. 5/5, Em

I too hope that this is about LIFE in general and not related to true life events of your own,BUT if they are,well I can only urge you to ring child line, and share your pain and bring it to an end, xp

This was interesting, and again, I thought it was a very important message. I think you could word things a bit better, but overall I did like it. Teachers abuse the authority they have, like most people given authority, or they simply don't care. The people we are suppose to trust in life, always end up being the ones we shouldn't be trusting at all.

Very true. the ending touches the heart.

Holy crap! I totally almost cried when I read the end of this. It is so touching that she tries to reach out through pictures, but the teacher does not see what she is trying to say. I love it