Birds of paradise, !!

a bird symbol of fredom , happyness, peace , and many others, you combined them with paradise, witch is the most desired place for a person ,
and you put them both arround one person SOSO , he must be an exceptional angel to fly arround you ingrid , and mean soo much to you and influence your life and your thoughts and sight

the poem is perfect in structure , and the flow and the emotions are soo clear , soo i enjoyed it !!

but i would give this poem a rhyme (call me rhyming maniac ) althought it is not required

excelent work!

This was a very beautiful friendship poem. I know Soso as well and you described her very well. She's an angel and cares about everyone and anyone. Amazing write, great dedication. Very thoughtful poem. 5/5.

Aww i hopes you let this person read this!!!!! you do a great job of making your poems unique like you dont use the usual writing technique i love it : ) 5/5