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  • 15 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    Very well written keep up the awesome work

  • 15 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    It is really good and how you set it usually says somthing bout how you wrote it so YOUR PARAGRAPH STYLE COULD BE SAYING HOW YOU WOULD RECITE IT IF YOU EVER WERE TO but yeah its realy good your verey blunt and straight forward with your meaning