This was sad. It's really sad when this does happen to someone, they love someone and then the relationship doesn't work out. It happens a lot, and I hope that you will be able to move on from this if this really did happen for you. :/ This was sad, kind of simple but I do see a little improvement in your word choice from your other poems I read months ago.. so good job on that, I do recognize that. :] Great work, sad sad poems I've been reading. I hope to see happy ones once again from you.

5/5