That was amazing... its sad tho...
a few things confused me...

And sealed it was a bloody kiss
Is this supposed to be and wat sealed it was a bloody kiss???

IDK... and Her hands shook as you held up that gun

this confused me cause its suicide...

BUT!
IT WAS GREAT! I LOVED IT! great choice of words... and very powerful. EMOTIONAL! if u need to talk just message me=]