Very vivid imagery portrayed here. Perfect picture of a perfect moment captured for eternity. Very nice. Peace :)

Michael,

I loved both versions. They are both so romantic and written with such tenderness:)
Beautiful:)

(((hugs)))

5/5 Ingrid

I enjoyed both versions of this unique and beautiful style of poetry. I envision the same picture as, "Miss Take," explained. Somewhere, that couple is still twirling to the song. Wonderful. 5/5

Nice job on this form and the one for fun. It is hard to get across a message in such a few short lines but you did a good job doing that.

Michael
This is beautiful..I love the first line Waltzing souls. What a vision for the minds eye.

Waltzing souls swirl together,
Within an eternal frame;
Their dance captured long ago,
True love's masterpiece.

Excellent job on this form. I see 2 lovers from long ago still locked together in a eternal dance.
Great job!
((Hugs))
Cindy