Comments : Growing Feelings

  • 11 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    It's cute and sweet.
    i can relate to this ...
    i meet someone in here too.
    this person is just a wow.. hehehe..
    i love it. simple but yet a wow!!. Nice job. keep it up

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 11 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Wow! that is touching. Making a connection with people you least expect. ;)

    The second line I feel it is missing a syllable.
    overal it needs a little more feeling to make the poem stronger.

    I will be reading more of your poems.

    I hope I'm not being too critical, my friend. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jesus Freak Forever

    I so feel you. I have a guy like that in my life. I meet someone on here too but it didn't quite work out how I planned, but I really hope that everything works out for you!!! :)