Come on anger I'm ready for you
Give me everything you have got left
You have taken everything else anyway
And you will not be forgiven for your theft
For the second line , in stead of you have , try 'that you've' . It's less awkward . And for the third just replace you have with 'you've' .
Like a phoenix I will rise through are debris
Are should be our .
Again , i like the over all idea . You're a very talented writter , just try and be careful of the awkwardness .. But still 5/5 once again .