Very interesting concept. I enjoyed the fact that you had it in a unique setting, a film shoot. This concept was done very well and I believe was thought of a great deal. Very well done.

There are places where the flow needs some improvement

"let your imagination run wild
and you'll find that your creative ideas are overload"

I would recommend putting it something like "Let yourself run wild, your idea's will put you in overload"

The reason I put that there is because it completely changes the structure and flow at the end. The last few lines really throw off what the rest of the poem has created.

I feel other than the mentioned above, that this is a really good poem, putting the jacket around her to keep her warm, good similie. I enjoyed this poem.

5 Boss Stars out of 5.

You really made a good story with this one, Azzza:) I could see it all in front of me and yes..the best pictures are taken by accident;)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

This was a great write 5/5