Comments : Be Kind, Rewind

  • 10 years ago

    by StandStill

    Pedal to the floor
    Rubber to the dirt
    Drive to the stars
    Thinking it won't hurt

    ^^ I like the opening a lot. Especially the last line.

    Pencil to paper
    Metal to skin
    Be kind and rewind
    The same bitter sin

    ^^ I wonder how many times I've thought that. I mean, really. How many times can we scream, cry, repeat?

    Glass vial to lips
    Cold runs down your throat
    Slips down your sweet heart
    The things you'll never know

    ^^ That stanza makes me want to throw up. The things none of us will ever know...

    The twist, and a snap
    We're too low on time
    So sit back and relax
    Just be kind and rewind

    ^^ I don't think i understood. sorry.

    5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Wow. Very intense. Very impressive. I liked it a lot. You have a way with words.

  • 10 years ago

    by ChallengexEverything

    That was amazig :]

    ill be sure to check out some of your other stuff.

    5/5

    :]