Pedal to the floor
Rubber to the dirt
Drive to the stars
Thinking it won't hurt

^^ I like the opening a lot. Especially the last line.

Pencil to paper
Metal to skin
Be kind and rewind
The same bitter sin

^^ I wonder how many times I've thought that. I mean, really. How many times can we scream, cry, repeat?

Glass vial to lips
Cold runs down your throat
Slips down your sweet heart
The things you'll never know

^^ That stanza makes me want to throw up. The things none of us will ever know...

The twist, and a snap
We're too low on time
So sit back and relax
Just be kind and rewind

^^ I don't think i understood. sorry.

5.5

Wow. Very intense. Very impressive. I liked it a lot. You have a way with words.

That was amazig :]

ill be sure to check out some of your other stuff.

5/5

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