Wow, that was deep. It struck somethingin me and it made me realize some things about my life. All in three stanzas. Thank you.

There is one thing that is really bugging me. My friends call me a grammar freak... in this line:
"Now I feel this whole where you were"
"whole" should be "hole"

Thats all! 5/5 <3

I Loved It ! :D It Was Short , But It Gave Me A Big Idea Of What Youu Where Talking About . Was It A Miscarraige ?? Cause , Well , Im Only 14 But I Had This Dream I Was Pregnent And It Felt Really Real ! And I Could Actually Feel It Inside Me ... And I Felt Really Connected To It ! And When I Woke Up , I Cried My Eyes Out Cause It Was Gone . And I Felt Really Empty After . :(

It makes me feel a great sense of loss!its devastating

That is the beauty of it,it carries abroad what it was meant to!

Powerful