Comments : Your Everything

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    I loved the flow in this poem, it was really nice. Well written and hearfelt. Don't think ONE needs to be capitalised. I think the second to last stanza is a bit self centered and I don't particularly like it. You could rearrange it to say you'd be the one for him but to suggest perfection isn't the right way to go about it. A good write in all. Really admired the flow, well done.