When you feel this strongly for a woman you should go after her sweetheart. Life is so short and you have to grab whatever happiness you can get. Your memories of love are all you take with you when you leave this earth one day. Be sure you have plenty of them to keep you company in the after life;)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid
ps: lovely poem, the repetition made it stand out!

I can feel this one..and I normally can't feel a connection with poems, I'm dealing with similar stuff in my life right now... Good luck let me know if it works for ya, might help me decide what to do...

5/5

A lovely peace of work.... It sometimes help me to write down things i can not express and your poem has reflection on many people.. that i'm sure of.

well done!

This is beautiful, i can feel the desire of longing and wishing, make it a dream come true. Keep it up, kel.

Im speechless this poem was amazing