Comments : Star-crossed lovers

  • 15 years ago

    by BK Butterfly

    5/5 for me! :D it's really gorgeous!

    I loved

    "Do you know?
    How much poetry there is in your eyes"
    too sweet!

    B.

  • 15 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow i havent read a happy love poem in a while, it kinda touched, i loved the last stanza nice work.

  • 15 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    I liked the rythem how you did the "Do you know?" "do you feel" "is it true" at the begginging. it really tied into the poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Fantastic! The flow was ok. The poem itself was amazing. Emotion is one heck of a thing isnt it?

  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    I liked the questions asked in this poem, and I am happy to see you used some puncuation, example, "?" However, that is not enough, puncuation is very important in poetry.

    Overall I liked the flow and structure of the poem. Nice choice of words, keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by Adam

    Thank you for commenting on my poem i didnt think ne body read them. i read a couple of your poems and i think you r great with your words i should learn a thing or two from you. this poem is wonderful keep it up R+J